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Paul's whole world was spinning.  The Proxitol made it incredibly difficult for him to think clearly. Maya? Yes, her name was Maya. She had told him it would only be a few days, that the thing inside would dissolve.  She'd been wrong, and she'd been surprised that she'd been wrong, not that it mattered. Resting his head against the cool porcelain of the toilet in the cell he called a room, Paul
could almost laugh about how this all seemed like some ridiculous dream. But the pain, the disorientation, and the feeling of...something inside...assured him it was anything but.  

The growth had started spreading again, but it was different this time. The iridescent scales had formed
patches around his hips, wrapped around his waist, and then branched out into two separate lines that
ran up and gathered around his shoulder blades, sprouting opaque sacs.
 
That night he dreamed of an ocean, somewhere far, far away. Something large and shapeless, sparkling like a star-covered sky, swam past and circled around him. Orbs of light blinked in and out of existence as a Voice echoed within his skull.

Please, We Must Help Mother.

"Who are you? What do you want with me?"

I Am Tal'shen Spawn of Lysanna.  Please, We Must Help Her.

"Why can't anyone give me any ANSWERS!"  His head swirled with frustration and fear. "I don't understand any of this!"

A feeling of deep regret surrounded Paul.  
I Am Sorry. I Can Only Tell You Little. I Am Tal'shen, Spawn Of Lysanna.  She Seeks Asylum From Those That Would Come Again. The One You Call Maya Holds Within Her The Sister-Progeny Of Lysanna.  I Cannot Sense Her Motives, Only Tell You She Has Not Told You Everything.

"Why isn't the Proxitol working on you?"

I Am Not A Normal Spawn.  I Am Abnormal, Mutated, Immune To The Poison Being Used. I Cannot Leave You As Others Would Leave Their Hosts. If I Am To Survive, Then It Is In MY Interests To Help AND Keep You Alive. I Shall Try And Assist, As You Will See.

"What do you mea-"

It Is Time You Woke Up. SHE Is Approaching.

When Paul opened His Eyes, he couldn't really say he was surprised to see that the sacs had popped, leaving wriggling masses of tentacles sprouting from his shoulder blades.

The door opened, and Maya stepped in.
A submission for The Odyssey 2 contest
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C-blaze21 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Now this is getting suspenseful.
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The-Raven-Soul Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww! The spawn is such a sweetheart! :meow:
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MajoPavlovic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
This is my favorite chapter! I was hoping that Ch 5 would be something that connects with your story, that will take us to the journey into another world, but we are still trapped in that ''prison'' and it's becoming boring with all that tentacles and colors ... I won't illustrate it anyway. Congrats!
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nocoolname4me Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
congrats!
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NigmaSin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is going so goodie good~ yay for the chap
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Daketufirak Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Well the story is in the main page of the project, so I guess you won the submission! =)

Awesome story!
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MelissaBoreal Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Traditional Artist
Wonderful chapter! I like the visuals you have included.
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XxLivingWellxX Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was going to stop writing chapters for this project and even paying attention to it, but this chapter submission is amazing! Fantastic work and I hope you win more submissions later on as the story comes to an end~~ :heart:
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CZGrey Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Are we able to add submissions for other Chapters? I thought that once you got picked you should let others at it?
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Loona-Cry Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're allowed to keep writing. :)
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CZGrey Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Well then awesome! I think I'll just submit for chapters 6 and 8, though.
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Loona-Cry Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Submit for as many as you like. :XD: Remember, the chapters are short so you should have a spare couple of minutes to whip something up for all of the chapters (with any luck)~ ^^
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XxLivingWellxX Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea, in all honesty :icondragonidle: I've never won so i wouldn't know for sure, but :iconmarkmywords85: won the chapter 1 submission and he wrote a chapter two submission that made it into the top five of chapter 2, so I would think you should be able to continue writing :icondragonnod1:
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CZGrey Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thank you everybody. I really do appreciate the well wishes and the likes. But I think all the submissions I've read for Chapter 4 were really good too!
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aynawiseone Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow, such a good follow-up on the last chapter!!
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myomi-chan Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
YES!!! X3 this is so AWESOMEEEEEEEE XD
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zoefish Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Congratulations, this is awesome!!
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RoseLaflesh Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Way to go. I won't lie, I am a little jealous, but only because this is better than what I thought up.
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demonsweat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, tentacles eh? I think I can work with this. :D

Congrats on being chosen, great piece! I'm glad to see this taking a slightly more horrific turn.
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momanari Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm are you thinking 'tentacle rape' by any chance? :D
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demonsweat Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hm we'll see, we'll see. :D
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MarinaBoccuzzi Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh horror!
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:iconczgrey:
CZGrey Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Um... thank you very much for the comments.
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tamaranorbust Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Suitably horrific! :) Beautifully written, congratulations on being selected!
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Sayuri14 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Writer
Congrats on being selected :)
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MarinaBoccuzzi Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Congrads on winning the Chapter 4 submission!
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MarinaBoccuzzi Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tentacle love!!!!
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